Starting Out In The Evening is a film high on aspirations, but short on substance. It is among a small list of films to come out in recent years that attempt to understand the world surrounding a literary genius. While the movie is a nice study of human relationships, it is not so successful in portraying its central characters: an aging writer and a young academic. The story essentially deals with the fallout from Leonard Schiller's life as a writer. His personal shortcomings, as both father and husband, are to be read as essential to his success as a writer. Similarly, his writing is shown to have fatally wounded his daughter, as she takes up with men who make her invisible, just as he had done while writing his novels. Put another way, his daughter has learned to subordinate herself to the dreams of others; and deep down Schiller knows this. We, of course, learn that contradictions are almost always visible, and almost always irritating, because they illuminate our own hypocrisy. This is why Schiller dislikes Casey. But Schiller, in a predictable turn, is forced to undergo change when Casey disproves his idea "that people never change," by taking him to the hospital and showing him kindness at a time of great vulnerability. Yet, this sudden change of heart is too predictable to be believable. I feel like the characters in this film grew personally, but their growth always felt forced: they grew in ways that were to be expected and all at pace with the narrative. Real life is rarely like that.
My biggest complaint about the film is on the authenticity of the main characters: Leonard and Heather. As a graduate student, of literature, I found it amusing that references to great works, and one-liners about literary style were invoked to give credibility to these two characters. I never really felt that Leonard was actually a writer; I only felt that I was supposed to believe he was a writer because he had lots of books and a typewriter in his study. Similarly, Heather didn't seem like an academic; she seemed like a girl at a dinner party who could feign literary erudition. Heather and Leonard's conversations were laughable, especially when the subject of their conversations is literature. This aspect of the film was disappointing because I was hoping to see a study of writing process and imagination; I was also hoping to see an honest portrayal of a burgeoning intellectual. So I was very disappointed to see contrived dialog in substitution for believable character detail. I think the film could have been strengthened if we had seen more of Leonard writing and more of Heather reading. For example, when Heather opened one of Schiller's novels, there wasn't a note or mark or anything in the margins. The book looked brand new; it didn't look like it had been "read to death." I may be nitpicking here, but little details like this could have made the film more authenticand wasn't that the goal? I enjoyed the film for its look into our fickle lives and relationships, but I came into it with an expectation that I would learn about a writer and his world. Yet, I only got to live in the aftermath of his world. I wanted to see Schiller labor over the keys of his manual typewriter, in his quiet desperation to solidify his literary legacyand in the process his life. Instead, I got to see Ariel, his daughter, struggle to right herself in the aftermath of his neglect; I got to see a pseudo-intellectual find herself in pursuit of her thesis; and I got to see an old man find resolve in his darkest hour. E.M Forester says that "what is wonderful about great literature is that it transforms the man who reads it towards the condition of the man who wrote." Starting Out In The Evening was supposed to take us to the "heart" of Leonard Schiller, but it instead, took us to the periphery.